Proposal Feedback

This highly detailed proposal works well to propose the ideas behind the magazine, to me as a potential buyer. The explanation beind the name leaves me convinced that it could sell to audiences based upon the name alone, as indivisual is a clever play on words that automatically tells an audience member that the writers are clever, funny and related to your favourite Indie genre.

The description of your target audience is detailed, and means that when describing your magazine, it is clearly stating who your target audience is, and then describes your secondary target audience and why they would support the genre.

What you appear to be missing in this proposal however is a quick description of how you will entice your target audience (based upon their gender specifically), and then the same thing with your secondary audeince. This is important as more detail will lead to a more successful proposal.

 

 

Feedback Courtesy of Oscar Perillo